The Stained Sun

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The Stained Sun

I have been orbiting this issue

Wondering how to address it

Not because I have no mouth

But this issue is a scratch on the sun

Sometimes I get no light because of it

Sometimes I think I like the darkness it brings

I have been orbiting around a stained sun

I sometimes want to clean this shit up

But I am afraid to get burnt

So sometimes I stop orbiting and hide

I hide from the stain

Maybe just maybe it will go away


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17 Comments Add yours

  1. Nyamwa says:

    I really like the idea of a stained sun.

    1. jackie says:

      Thank You!!!

  2. It’s great that you brought orbiting into the spin. That’s creative Jackie. Me like it. 😁

    1. jackie says:

      Thank you Emmanuel

      1. You’re very welcome!

  3. Love this piece!

    1. jackie says:

      Thank you

      1. You’re welcome Jackie!

  4. faithakatiki says:

    Beautiful piece

    1. jackie says:

      thank you

  5. kinge says:

    Creative metaphorism. Really nice

    Sometimes the act of facing challenges make them dissapear..

    1. jackie says:

      True. Thank you for reading.

      1. kinge says:


  6. judeitakali says:

    Quite the undertone of distress, 😰

    1. jackie says:


  7. Let's Cook says:

    Love this piece

    1. jackie says:

      THank you💞💞

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